Wow. I'm stunned. That's really, really cool. I wish I could write like that. *laughs* But good on you. I'm happy that it flows so easily for you. :)

I'd love to read and comment it but I'm afraid I don't really have the time for that now. I need to finish my own fic and I'm not as fast a writer as you. :(
However, if you still need me after May 1, I will be happy to read it for you. :)

I don't know if my story is good either, but you sure win the who's-the-faster-writer competition. :D